In this grand pattern of things you actually receive a B+ for effort. Where you actually lost me was first on your particulars. You know, as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And it couldn't be much more accurate in this article. Having said that, permit me inform you just what did work. The text is pretty powerful which is possibly the reason why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, despite the fact that I can easily notice a leaps in reason you make, I am not really certain of exactly how you seem to unite your details that make the final result. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your issue but hope in the near future you link your dots better.