In the great pattern of things you'll receive a B- with regard to effort. Exactly where you actually confused me personally was first in the details. As as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be much more accurate in this article. Having said that, allow me say to you what did do the job. The writing can be rather engaging and that is probably why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can easily see a leaps in reason you make, I am not really convinced of how you seem to connect the ideas which help to make the final result. For the moment I will subscribe to your issue however wish in the future you connect the facts better.