In the excellent scheme of things you receive an A for effort. Where exactly you actually lost everybody was on your details. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be more correct in this article. Having said that, permit me tell you just what exactly did do the job. The article (parts of it) is quite engaging and this is most likely why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, even though I can certainly notice the leaps in reason you make, I am not really convinced of how you appear to connect your details which produce the actual final result. For now I shall subscribe to your position however trust in the near future you link the dots much better.