In this amazing scheme of things you actually secure a B+ just for hard work. Where exactly you lost us was first in your particulars. You know, they say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more accurate right here. Having said that, allow me tell you what exactly did do the job. Your text is certainly really engaging which is possibly the reason why I am making an effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, while I can notice a leaps in logic you come up with, I am not necessarily sure of just how you seem to unite the details which in turn help to make the actual final result. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your position however trust in the foreseeable future you link the dots much better.